Help with my fan fic

[faya27]

Jan 15, 2011 12:33:54 GMT -5 princeeric said:

eric is a pretty soft character but in the case of fanfics you have the power to make the characters however you want so dont worry too much. but i would think he be jelous and heartbroken.......... just my opinion.

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Following from that scene, I want to write where Ariel's date with Thor doesn't go as well as Ariel's sisters had hoped. I'm not sure what reason to write why it went wrong. I'm thinking of having Ariel just not feeling comfortable dating Thor because while he is a nice fellow, she was still turned off by his arrogance. So she ended the date early. What do you think?